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Aloha Jon,

Glad to hear you're enjoying authoring. It's at the very heart of publication and there's nothing as satisfying as seeing a book I've authored "out there." I love editing, too, of course, and I think it makes me a better writer in the long run. Right now I'm editing:

BLOOD MONEY: TALES FROM TWO CONTINENTS
by Scott Mastro
Written en route across the US and Europe, Blood Money - Tales from Two Continents captures the English language in a number of locales, showcasing the expressive expansiveness of a written language as it wanderlust-rambles the land, settling its prose on occasion in distinct and exact locations.

We're fast approaching layup and proofing with this one. My favorite story is "Mr. Emm's Bucket," a story of a proper British advertising man who wakes up with a bucket on his head, and the title work, "Blood Money," a monolog by a down-and-out but street-wise blood donator. 

THE OIL MAN
by Leon Puissegur
Avid conspiracy theorist John Marx, supervisor on an oil derrick in the Gulf of Mexico, comes into possession of an email and box that changes first his, then the world's point of view about oil. It all comes down to not who controls the world's petroleum supply, but who people, corporations and governments think control it. Tempers explode, guns flare, people die, all due to an email and a shard of crystal.

We've just gone from editing into layup and proofing.  A thriller from the start, THE OIL MAN takes readers on a roller-coaster ride from the halls of corporate petroleum to the oil derricks of the Gulf of Mexico. If you've ever wondered why oil is so dark, here's why.

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Daniel S. Janik
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Mahalo, Dan, for everything.
     This has to be one of the most exciting times of my life, akin to bring a new baby into the family. Since I already have enough children, the timing is right.
     There were  many challenges involved in writing a first book and getting it to a point where it was ready for publication. Initially, the biggest challenge was my lack of experience. It took me a year to write the first draft. Little did I know then that the rewriting and editing would go on for another four years. Along the way I met several established authors who taught me a lot and worked with me on the rewrites.
     Once the manuscript was at a place where I could say I liked it, the challenge was working with my editor to find and correct all those little mistakes that slipped by. Even when I was sure I'd found them all, there were more. The markup process is tedious and can go on for weeks, or months.
    To authors in the preparation phase I would say, hang in there. Do whatever it takes to keep your sanity. Meditate. Drink margaritas. Go to the beach and watch the sunset. Have another manuscript started, so you can go to it when you can't bear to look at your current work one more time. Maintain a sense or humor. Talk to other authors who've been there, and those who are currently suffering the same malady.
     To unpublished authors I would say, never give up.
Think of yourself as a writer. Go to writers' conferences and workshops.  Meet established authors. There are many writer's retreats with bestselling authors. Attend the retreats if there's any way you can afford to do so. Read a lot.
     I am nearly done with the first draft of my second book. The lessons I learned  from the first have helped with the second. A couple of those lessons are: 1) start with a good outline and 2) edit as you go. I hope to have the second book in print a year from now, then a third and a fourth.
    

Almost Paradise (2011)

By Laurie Hanan
274 pp 9” x 6”

ISBN:
978-0983286134
http://www.savantbooksandpublications.com/currentworks.php

http://www.amazon.com/Almost-Paradise-Laurie-Hanan

 About the Book: Mail carrier Louise came to Oahu to start over. In the comfortable life she has built for herself, there are no surprises. She likes it that way. One day, while delivering the mail, Louise notices something wrong. One of her elderly customers, Mrs. Santos, is missing. Mrs. Santos lives alone and has no close family or friends. Even after Louise alerts the police, she can’t stop worrying. Has Mrs. Santos fallen? Is she suffering from amnesia? Was she assaulted while walking to the store? Louise can’t sit back and wait for the police to do their job. She sets out to find Mrs. Santos, and a bizarre series of events begins to unfold. Louise’s peaceful existence and anonymity are shattered, and she is forced to draw on strengths she didn’t know she had, to stay one step ahead of disaster.


Laurie says, “Even before I started my career with the Honolulu Post Office, I noticed that mail carriers move about almost invisibly. They become part of the scenery, allowing them to observe the community without being observed themselves. An avid reader of mysteries since childhood, I thought it would be fun to write a series of mysteries with a mail carrier as the protagonist.” ALMOST PARADISE is the first of the series.

 

About the Author: Laurie grew up in the picturesque islands of the South Pacific. Her father pioneered air travel to many of the tiny islands, and Laurie often accompanied him on his flights. After high school, she moved Seattle to study photography and dance. While there, she discovered an interest in Jewish Studies, Hebrew, and Middle Eastern dance. She went to Israel to pursue these subjects, earning her keep by working in the cotton fields of the Jezreel Valley. On a second trip to Israel, she met the love of her life. They eloped and were married in Cyprus. Laurie and her husband spent time exploring the Far East, before settling in Hawaii. Laurie had a career with the Postal Service, and raised three children. For eighteen years she taught Middle Eastern dance and led a performing dance troupe. When she isn’t writing her Louise Golden mystery series, she works to promote animal rights and rescue, and practices yoga, meditation, and qi gong. Laurie currently lives on Oahu with her husband and two youngest children. Visit the author’s website at http://www.wix.com/lauriehanan/laurie-hanan


A Customer Review: Almost Paradise took me by surprise. The unorthodox heroine, a mail carrier in Hawaii, gets involved in a missing persons case. Louise is not the ever-confident and totally competent sleuth. In fact she is trying to live a uneventful, low-commitment life, when her concern for an elderly lady on her delivery route pulls her into a mystery with abductions, car tails, a celebrity pool party, exotic dancing, smuggling of artifacts, and of course, murder.
The writing is very smooth and is a fast read, with enough detail to get views of the different cultural and scenic backdrops of Hawaii. It's not all picture-postcard perfect and tranquil days at the beach. In fact when things settle down and Louise slips into a hot shower, the last pieces of the puzzle fall into place. There's a final twist and a steamy shower fight scene that would make great cinema. This is a good read if you like mystery/thrillers with an everywoman protagonist
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Almost Paradise
How Far Is Heaven?
Another Day in Paradise (coming December 2012)
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I had hoped by now Michelle Harada would have had the chance to join us, but it appears she has been delayed. As my time is running out as well, I did want to post a short excerpt from "The Hanging of Dr. Hanson" nonetheless:

The fall rains of 1857 pound the western Illinois prairie. Rain pours from the brim of Hanson's hat as he slowly plods forward. Previously informed of a ford in the river he follows the directions along the steam south to locate the ford. The river is swollen and swift as Hanson peers intently for any sign of a place to ford the river. Suddenly, just over the roar of the water, he hears a voice call out,

"Help! Help!" the urgent cry comes from the river.

Sitting up in the saddle to gain a better view, Hanson scans the waters hoping to see who is calling for help. He sees an arm wave then disappear below the waters. Spurring his horse, he speeds to the embankment and calls out,

"Hello! Where are you?"

"Here! Help," the voice cries out again as it recedes away swiftly.

Hanson sees a man clinging desperately to a log hurtling downstream, pushed by the swift waters. He turns his horse and speeds south, determined to get ahead of the man on the log. Seeing the sign "Ford Area," he turns his mount into the water. The water is less powerful in this section as much of it becomes an underground river, emerging a half-mile below the ford again becoming the deep, swift current embracing the hapless traveler hugging the log.

"Here!" Hanson shouts to get the man's attention. The man looks up and then Hanson throws a rope in his direction that the man catches. Hanson wraps the rope around his arm several times and pulls as the man seizes the lifeline. The horse fights against the charging current, which although diminished still has great force. Up the far side of the embankment they race, pulling the man from the current and onto the shore.

"Are you okay?" Hanson asks as he dismounts.

"Thanks to the Lord and the angel he sent to save me!" The man says looking up coughing water from his lungs.

Hanson notices to his surprise that the traveler is Indian, although dressed as a white man. Hanson also notes he refers to "the Lord" rather than "Great Spirit" as he kneels next to the man while the rain continues to pelt down.

"I am Chief Wakoa of the Muscatine." The rescued traveler coughs more water out. "I thought to make the northern ford, but the water too swift. I lost … horse … wagon … They went away," he points weakly downstream.

"You speak very good English, Chief. My name is Hanson," Hanson says.

"Yes. I am Christian. My minister and his wife have spend many hours teaching me English good." His English slips as he speaks this time, as he continues to cough.

"They are to be commended," declares Hanson, patting him on the back.

"They are not far from here. I will go there. They can help me."

"I will help you get there Chief, Lord willing."



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Laurie - Congratulations again on the release of "Almost Paradise" !  Your cover is wonderful and creates an immediate intrigue almost insisting a reader pick up the book.

Best wishes for great success with your mystery novel!

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Aloha R. Page,

Information about the Savant Bookstore Honolulu is available 24/7 at

http://www.savantbooksandpublications.com/savantbookstore.php

On the page, we have a link to the "event" (if there is one that day).  The store is next to Waikiki in the Clubhouse Honolulu (former Clubhouse Makino and Hard Rock Cafe Honolulu). The owner, Ernie, has asked me to schedule a live jazz appearance with you. I've also got several other requests for your visit. Email me separately for details. You DID say that you'd like to visit Hawaii again soon, didn't you? :-)

Sincerely,
Daniel S. Janik
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Thanks, Bentley. I've been carrying a copy of my book around with me, and the cover draws attention from everyone.

R. Page, keep us informed about a jazz appearance in Hawaii!


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Almost Paradise
How Far Is Heaven?
Another Day in Paradise (coming December 2012)
author's website
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Dan & my fellow Savanteers,

My CD "experience" with Savant was a good one, to say the least.

Dan and Savant graphic designer, Dennis Krull, helped me every step of the way. Kudos to you both!  The cool part was how fast it all came together once began to move forward with the project. Very enjoyable...

I don't have a verbatim account of my songs with me right now, but suffice to say that the style is contemporary jazz with me playing the trombone with some terrific L.A. studio musicians. I believe the character of the CD fairly matches my novel, "Tropic of California"; fun, sexy, and So Cal "hip". I was just stroke of luck that the CD matched up so well with the novel. So, we'll see how the "dual marketing" does... Three sales? I love it!  And Honolulu bookstores? Why not? And, I'll certainly be following up with Jean's store L.A. suggestions...

And again, thanks Dan for all that you do to help and encourage all of us writers, editors, and support staff! (Setsuko must be feeding you some really good  high-energy food to keep you so on top of Savant issues!

R Page

PS Forgive me my fellow Savantians, but I have to go to choir rehearsal; go figure...




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Here is my first excerpt.

aloha,

Laurie Hanan

Almost Paradise (2011)

By Laurie Hanan

274 pp 9” x 6”

ISBN: 978-0983286134

http://www.savantbooksandpublications.com/currentworks.php

http://www.amazon.com/Almost-Paradise-Laurie-Hanan

 

Excerpt #1

"Mrs. Santos? Mrs. Santos?"

There was no response.

"It's Louise, your mail carrier. I have your mail."

Mrs. Santos was hard of hearing. Maybe she hadn't heard my knock

over the sound of the rain. I knocked again, harder this time, and waited.

I tried the doorknob. It was unlocked. The old door, swollen from

humidity, complained with a loud creak when I pushed it. Just inside the

door, Pipsqueak looked up at me. Her tail thumped against the floor. She was

the only dog on my route who never barked at me. She didn't bark now, even

when I stepped into the house.

The first thing I noticed was the smell. Unwashed dog and…something

I couldn't place. I waited while my eyes adjusted to the dim light.

 

 About the Book: Mail carrier Louise came to Oahu to start over. In the comfortable life she has built for herself, there are no surprises. She likes it that way. One day, while delivering the mail, Louise notices something wrong. One of her elderly customers, Mrs. Santos, is missing. Mrs. Santos lives alone and has no close family or friends. Even after Louise alerts the police, she can’t stop worrying. Has Mrs. Santos fallen? Is she suffering from amnesia? Was she assaulted while walking to the store? Louise can’t sit back and wait for the police to do their job. She sets out to find Mrs. Santos, and a bizarre series of events begins to unfold. Louise’s peaceful existence and anonymity are shattered, and she is forced to draw on strengths she didn’t know she had, to stay one step ahead of disaster.


Laurie says, “Even before I started my career with the Honolulu Post Office, I noticed that mail carriers move about almost invisibly. They become part of the scenery, allowing them to observe the community without being observed themselves. An avid reader of mysteries since childhood, I thought it would be fun to write a series of mysteries with a mail carrier as the protagonist.” ALMOST PARADISE is the first of the series.

 

About the Author: Laurie grew up in the picturesque islands of the South Pacific. Her father pioneered air travel to many of the tiny islands, and Laurie often accompanied him on his flights. After high school, she moved Seattle to study photography and dance. While there, she discovered an interest in Jewish Studies, Hebrew, and Middle Eastern dance. She went to Israel to pursue these subjects, earning her keep by working in the cotton fields of the Jezreel Valley. On a second trip to Israel, she met the love of her life. They eloped and were married in Cyprus. Laurie and her husband spent time exploring the Far East, before settling in Hawaii. Laurie had a career with the Postal Service, and raised three children. For eighteen years she taught Middle Eastern dance and led a performing dance troupe. When she isn’t writing her Louise Golden mystery series, she works to promote animal rights and rescue, and practices yoga, meditation, and qi gong. Laurie currently lives on Oahu with her husband and two youngest children. Visit the author’s website at http://www.wix.com/lauriehanan/laurie-hanan


A Customer Review: Almost Paradise took me by surprise. The unorthodox heroine, a mail carrier in Hawaii, gets involved in a missing persons case. Louise is not the ever-confident and totally competent sleuth. In fact she is trying to live a uneventful, low-commitment life, when her concern for an elderly lady on her delivery route pulls her into a mystery with abductions, car tails, a celebrity pool party, exotic dancing, smuggling of artifacts, and of course, murder.
The writing is very smooth and is a fast read, with enough detail to get views of the different cultural and scenic backdrops of Hawaii. It's not all picture-postcard perfect and tranquil days at the beach. In fact when things settle down and Louise slips into a hot shower, the last pieces of the puzzle fall into place. There's a final twist and a steamy shower fight scene that would make great cinema. This is a good read if you like mystery/thrillers with an everywoman protagonist
.


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Author of fun Hawaiian mysteries
Almost Paradise
How Far Is Heaven?
Another Day in Paradise (coming December 2012)
author's website
West of the Equator blog
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Dan & my fellow Savanteers,

My CD "experience" with Savant was a good one, to say the least. Dan and Savant graphic designer, Dennis Krull, helped me every step of the way. Kudos to you both!  The cool part was how fast it all came together once began to move forward with the project. Very enjoyable...

I don't have a verbatim account of my songs with me right now, but suffice to say that the style is contemporary jazz with me playing the trombone with some terrific L.A. studio musicians. I believe the character of the CD fairly matches my novel, "Tropic of California"; fun, sexy, and So Cal "hip". I was just stroke of luck that the CD matched up so well with the novel. So, we'll see how the "dual marketing" does... Three sales? I love it!  And Honolulu bookstores? Why not? And, I'll certainly be following up with Jean's store L.A. suggestions...

And again, thanks Dan for all that you do to help and encourage all of us writers, editors, and support staff! (Setsuko must be feeding you some really good  high-energy food to keep you so on top of so many Savant issues!

R Page

PS Forgive me my fellow Savantians, but right now, I have to go to choir rehearsal; helps my writing.
Go figure...




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Aloha Laurie,

I have to agree with Bentley that your cover is an "eye catcher." Have you ever thought of doing cover artist work for Savant? 

Couldn't add anything to your excellent advice, Laurie. Getting the first one published hard, hard, hard. Getting the second one published is hard, hard. :-) Having experience with the publishing process really helps for the next one. The key, however, is always sales. If a book does well, then people are already aware of the author's name and quality of writing, so it helps both the second book and first book's sales.  By the way, the hardest thing I ever did was write and publish a series. It sounds easier than fresh-starts, but the fresh-starts are actually easier for me to sell to publishers.

Many Savant authors ask me about (or balk at) sending out those emails after we get the press release issued. This is the single most important event in a new book's life. It results in direct sales on Amazon.com, and that helps establish a sales rating, which in turn, helps distributors to decide to carry the book. It all begins with the emails.

Kapolei, where you live, is the "second Honolulu" and we were just talking about where in Kapolei we can feature your work. Ideas?  If so, email me.

Kudos to your editor, Dr. Zachary M. Oliver, too!  At Savant, the editors also send out emails, as well as Savant which does the same.

I wonder how the Postal Service would respond to your novel?  I wonder if they'd help promote it?

Sincerely,
Daniel S. Janik
Savant Books and Publications
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The time has come for me to log off as well, fellow Savanteers! 

Until next time ! 
Happy Trails to all of you!

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Aloha Everyone,

My name is Bill Sharp, author of Random Views of Asia fr
om the Mid-Pacific which is in lay-up and proof reading.  We are at the point now where we are organizing pictures into the manuscript and determing whether we will keep them or not, waiting for cover endorsements to come in, and readying ourselves for a few more proofings.

Random Views is an excellent tool for the general reader and Asian specialist who wants to know more about Asia.
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Aloha Dan,
   Talking about selling at this point is like talking to the mother of a 3-day-old about methods of child rearing. While my book was "in the oven" I observed how other authors promote their books. I have two friends from Kapolei whose books were successful and am getting advice from them. Only now I am able to take those first steps toward book promotion. Like writing, I'm sure promotion will be a learn-as-I-go process.
     I've been trying to think of a place in Kapolei to open a book store. The only place that always comes to mind is the Kahumana Cafe in Maile. It's more of an "alternative" restaurant, in a rambling old house. When you walk in the door, you enter a nicely appointed library filled with comfortable furniture and antique books. I've invited other authors to speak at my book club there, and the manager is always amenable to these types of events. The downside is Maili is to far off the beaten path for most people.
     There may be other places available in Kapolei, but I don't know of them. If I get any ideas, I'll let you know.
     The president of the Postal Worker's union is a good friend of mine. He will come to my house with a camera and take photos of me with the book to show at work. He is buying 20 copies.
Laurie Hanan

Almost Paradise (2011)

By Laurie Hanan

274 pp 9” x 6”

ISBN: 978-0983286134

http://www.savantbooksandpublications.com/currentworks.php

http://www.amazon.com/Almost-Paradise-Laurie-Hanan

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Aloha Everyone,

It's time for me to post as an author, at last.

My book award party at the Savant Bookstore Honolulu a couple weeks ago did well and we're rapidly approaching a new whale-watching season, so with that and Christmas, I'm looking towards a great sales period. I was pleased that A WHALE'S TALE won an honorable mention at the Hollywood Book Festival. Winning at book festivals mostly feeds one's ego (rather than sells books), and it always feels good to be stroked for one's writing. I just finished producing a 3' x 2' poster of the cover which I plan to sign and sell in limited edition, alongside some smaller poster versions. I'll have to let you know how that goes.

I'm pleased to see WAVELENGTHS - 2011 SAVANT POETRY ANTHOLOGY out and about. I love poetry and have published numerous works in anthologies and books including WAVELENGTHS. If writing is the nuts and bolts of publication, then poetry is its soul. While it's not as popular a genre as it has been in the past, I keep my fingers crossed that one day it will re-emerge and Savant will be in the lead. We had a wonderful Savant Bookstore Honolulu book party. The book is currently under consideration for a book festival award.

THE TURTLE DANCES manuscript is proceeding slowly; I'm almost ready to write it. I can feel it in my bones. The preliminary sketches by the artist look great and actually inspired me to rethink the plot. Briefly, a female turtle who surfs (turtles have been observed surfing inside of waves using their shells as a natural surfboard), sees a coupe on the beach dancing together and pines away to dance with one of her own kind.

THE SWORD OF KAMEHAMEHA manuscript is also proceeding well. As soon as I have the two books I'm editing into proofing, I plan to re-devote my time to the story. The story is loosely based a mele by King David Kalakaua in his book THE LEGENDS AND MYTHS OF HAWAII.

I have three other manuscripts in process, one that is undergoing major rewriting, that is the third in a series, that I'm thinking of changing into a Wiccan novel; a second, sci-fi novel called THE EDGE OF MADNESS, which is half-done; and a third, a psychological thriller based on M-Superstring Theory (a new physics theory supplanting Einstein's theories of space-time).

In the meantime, I'm teaching in the undergraduate liberal arts program at Argosy University Hawaii, and this term's a thriller unto itself: Philosophy of Religion, Philosophy of Ethics, Critical Thinking, and Advanced Psychology all play to my writing interests. I think many of my ideas come from keeping up on teaching.

Other Savant books I've authored:

FOOTPRINTS, SMILES AND LITTLE WHITE LIES (Savant 2008)

THE ILLUSTRATED MIDDLE EARTH (Savant 2008)

LAST AND FINAL HARVEST (Savant 2008)

Did you know I have authored several "outside" works including:

UNLOCK THE GENIUS WITHIN: NEUROBIOLOGICAL TRAUMA, TEACHING AND TRANSFORMATIVE LEARNING (Rowman & Littlefield, 2005) - I'm writing a sequel to it now.

SOURDOUGH SCOTT'S BEDTIME FAIRY TALES FROM ALASKA (Publication Consultants, 2005).

HOW TO CHOOSE THE BEST ENGLISH LANGUAGE SCHOOL IN THE USA (AuthorHouse, 2006).

Busy, busy, busy.

Sincerely,
Daniel S. Janik
Author of A WHALE'S TALE (Savant, 2009).


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Hi Savanteers. I was away for awhile and must leave again in little while. This has been a great 'Chat,' so many interesting facts, stories and lots of useful tips and information.
I have a second excerpt from my book, 'Who's Killing All The Lawyers.' This is the introduction of one of the main villains- Rod Eiker a British Soldier of fortune.

A radial engine seaplane banked over the Gulf of Mexico, early morning sunlight reflecting on the cockpit windows as the aircraft straightened direction for its approach. It swayed slightly in a light crosswind before touching down, its pontoons making a graceful feather of white on the blue-green lagoon. The engine throttled back, the sudden snarl startling a flock of flamingos from their wading and feeding to take flight, their outstretched necks resembling a squadron of supersonic transports. 

The pilot made a wide, arcing turn, moving in close to a white, fine-grained beach. Big Pine Key was one of many in the chain stretching from Key Largo to Key West. 

Palm trees crowded down to the sea, bright tropical flowers belied it was autumn in the Florida Keys. Before the propeller stopped, an inflatable Zodiac put out from the shore, its blunt nose curving upward, thrust forward by powerful twin outboards as it closed in on the seaplane. 

A door in the plane's fuselage swung open and a powerfully built man with a strong face, a mass of red, unruly hair and dressed in a black jumpsuit waved toward the Zodiac that came alongside. The redhead, Rodney Eiker, a hard-boiled British soldier of fortune, sloshed gum from one side of his mouth to the other, chewing furiously, snapping and crackling it.

 




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